Feedback - Project Presentation: Group 1

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name: Mariko Minagawa
B1: Submit
Date: August 23, 2001
Time: 11:05

ruby_feedback

It was great.It seemed that she was confident and comfortable, which made it easy to listen.If there was anything to correct maybe it would be the speed of the speech.There were times when she would go a little too fast,though it was understandable. Great introduction!Thank you!

mariko_feedback

Fast.More eye contact and body language should have been made.It would have been better if I hadn't used animation for my PPT, as it seemed to have taken a bit of time.

rie_feedback

A great speed and fluent English. Also as same as Ruby I thought she bought out a great casual atmosphere which made it easy to listen to. I also thought the designs for the PPT were just great.I felt that they had just the good amount of imformation and because the designs were great they were easy to understand.Cheers!

name: Ruby
B1: Submit
Date: August 23, 2001
Time: 11:20

ruby_feedback

1. As you can see, I was really tensed and read the notes all the time, I should be more relaxed to avoid the breakage of each words/ sentences. 2.The handling of powerpoint materials could be simplified more to prevent interupting my talk. 3. I'll try to drop my notes next time when I need to give a talk in English.( Hope so....) ^_^

mariko_feedback

Very friendly and fluent English, Lovely smile, Look good at podium, Interesting content, Nice ending! Could try to face to the audience more. (don't look at the screen too often!!) ^_^

rie_feedback

Clear presentation, Really really lovely smile, Look good at podium, Could relaxed more and let's try to drop the notes! Please DON'T let the notes cover your lovely face! ^_^

name: Rie Matsuki
B1: Submit
Date: August 23, 2001
Time: 11:38

ruby_feedback

Her structure was very clear. If her introduction had not been well-organized, the other partners' talks should not have been heard clearly.

And her English is perfect and got clearer. The introduction had lots of lovely phrases.

mariko_feedback

Her English is perfect. I needn't say anything. But the speed was a bit quick.

Her conclusion was so clear. Although I didn't have the confident of my part, I could hand over Mariko safely.

rie_feedback

At first, I made some mistakes in the last punch sentence... Perhaps everyone couldn't understand.

Concerning to langurage, I thought the pronaunciation of my first part have been improved. However, I need to improve to read by chunks. Sometime I stoped at the different place.

PowerPoint of my part, I think, was well-organized.

name: Rie Matsuki
B1: Submit
Date: August 23, 2001
Time: 11:39

ruby_feedback

Her structure was very clear. If her introduction had not been well-organized, the other partners' talks should not have been heard clearly.

And her English is perfect and got clearer. The introduction had lots of lovely phrases.

mariko_feedback

Her English is perfect. I needn't say anything. But the speed was a bit quick.

Her conclusion was so clear. Although I didn't have the confident of my part, I could hand over Mariko safely.

rie_feedback

At first, I made some mistakes in the last punch sentence... Perhaps everyone couldn't understand what I wanted to say exactly.

Concerning to langurage, I thought the pronaunciation of my first part have been improved. However, I need to improve to read by chunks. Sometime I stoped at the different place.

PowerPoint of my part, I think, was well-organized.

name: Rie Matsuki
B1: Submit
Date: August 23, 2001
Time: 11:40

ruby_feedback

Her structure was very clear. If her introduction had not been well-organized, the other partners' talks should not have been heard clearly.

And her English is perfect and got clearer. The introduction had lots of lovely phrases.

mariko_feedback

Her English is perfect. I needn't say anything. But the speed was a bit quick.

Her conclusion was so clear. Although I didn't have the confident of my part, I could hand over Mariko safely.

rie_feedback

At first, I made some mistakes in the last punch sentence... Perhaps everyone couldn't understand what I wanted to say exactly.

Concerning to langurage, I thought the pronaunciation of my first part have been improved. However, I need to improve readind by chunks. Sometime I stoped at the different place.

PowerPoint of my part, I think, was well-organized.

name: Martin
B1: Submit
Date: August 23, 2001
Time: 11:41

ruby_feedback

Good: Clear voice, easy to understand nice smile made it very natural and you seemed to be relaxed.

Improveable: you should not completely animate your slides

Introduction: very nice, good and short

Overview: very good

Interesting Content: Yes and up to date topic

'Signposting': good

Body language: very good

Eye contact: Excellent

Audience involvement: -

Visuals: a little bit bigger writing because it was very hardly to read.

Language: clear

mariko_feedback

Good: The native speaker did a great job. It was fantastic to listen to you, very professional.

Improveable: you should not completely animate your slides

Introduction: very nice, good and short

Overview: very good

Interesting Content: Yes and up to date topic

'Signposting': excellent

Body language: very good

Eye contact: Excellent

Audience involvement: -

Visuals: a little bit bigger writing because it was very hardly to read.

Language: native speaker

rie_feedback

Good: You looked like that you enjoyed it to present. I think you haven’t been nervous.

Improveable: you should not completely animate your slides

Introduction: very nice, good and short

Overview: very good

Interesting Content: Yes and up to date topic

'Signposting': excellent

Body language: very good

Eye contact: good

Audience involvement: -

Visuals: a little bit bigger writing because it was very hardly to read.

Language: has been your best performance

name: goong
B1: Submit
Date: August 23, 2001
Time: 12:12

ruby_feedback

she's eye contact and good body language.

mariko_feedback

she's clear overview.

rie_feedback

she's nice introduction.

name: Megumi
B1: Submit
Date: August 23, 2001
Time: 12:29

ruby_feedback

The visuals was taken time to show the audience. Also other teammate should support each other when the other student use the powerpoint. the above comment for the all members of this team. Her structure was good.

mariko_feedback

I think she already have most main abilities in the presentation before starting our course. She alway shows her idea clealy.

rie_feedback

Her structure was not clear for me because of too much information.. maybe. But she picked up the good point of their topic.

name: Gustavo
B1: Submit
Date: August 23, 2001
Time: 12:59

ruby_feedback

Very nice introduction, nature and lovely. Easy to understand. Try to read less because you can.

mariko_feedback

Very good entonation, fluid and fluent. Easy to understand. Try to read less because you can.

rie_feedback

I felt a very big improvement in this presentation about clear, relax and enjoy. Good Job in slides and talk.

name: Peter
B1: Submit
Date: August 23, 2001
Time: 13:44

ruby_feedback

It's always difficult to be first and to open a presentation, but you could manage it very well. Your smile makes good atmosphere. I think that your english is quite rich you uses a lot of good phrases and your grammar is correct. You seemed to me a little nervous, however there is no reason for it, because your english is confident and the topic was interesting. Practising can help in it. Your pronanciation is quite well, however i suppose that for people comming from Asia it can be very difficult. I think, that by further development of pronanciation an effective improvement could be achieved. I think you are on a good way to be able undertstand and lead even better your team in work.

from 1-5

- nice introduction 4-5 - clear overview 5 - clear structure 5 - interesting 4 content - clear 'signposting' 4-5 - good body language 4-5 - eye contact 4 - audience involvement 4 - designing and using visuals language 5

mariko_feedback

Excellent language, like CNN news. I would like to speak English the way like you. Concerning the presentation i think you felt relaxed and easy which is very good. May be further development could be achieved if you would speak to the audinece more avoiding to turn to the visual aids. For me the effects were a little bothering. Good work! from 1-5

- nice introduction 5 - clear overview 5 - clear structure 4-5 - interesting 4 content - clear 'signposting' 4-5 - good body language 4-5 - eye contact 4 - audience involvement 4 - designing and using visuals language 5

rie_feedback

I can see a big improvement compering your first presentation. You were much better in using visual aids and you were more relaxed. You used the pauses very well, so i think everybody was able to follow you. May be by speading up your talk and concentrating more on pronanciatian an even better performance could be achieved. The swot analyses was very impressive. I enjoyed your resenation.

from 1-5

- nice introduction 4-5 - clear overview 4-5 - clear structure 4-5 - interesting 5 content - clear 'signposting' 4-5 - good body language 4-5 - eye contact 4-5 - audience involvement 4 - designing and using visuals language 4

name: elio van kiko
B1: Submit
Date: October 22, 2002
Time: 00:20

ruby_feedback

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mariko_feedback

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rie_feedback

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name: haru
B1: Submit
Date: April 08, 2003
Time: 11:15

ruby_feedback

how are you

mariko_feedback

sd

rie_feedback

sdf

name: kate
B1: Submit
Date: September 26, 2004
Time: 01:53

ruby_feedback

is your mother home

mariko_feedback

your mother home

rie_feedback

is youur mother home