Feedback - Project Presentation: Group 4

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How did everyone do?

name: Gustavo
B1: Submit
Date: August 23, 2001
Time: 11:30

Gustavo_feedback

I think that it would be necessary to improve the introduction (hotter and nicer). Try to make nicer the talk to people. Some mistakes in pronunciation but in general, I have felt improvement .

goong_feedback

I have felt a big improvement in her pronunciation, good job. Try to read less. Maybe for all of us, it had been neccesary to join more the topics between us.

gerald_feedback

A very good professional presentation. Big job in the talk, slides and answering questions. Useful information. EXCELENT. I think you can speak whitout papers, it would be perfect.

name: GOONG
B1: Submit
Date: August 23, 2001
Time: 12:29

Gustavo_feedback

He works hard and improve a lot. He's audience involvement.

goong_feedback

I'm exciting. I said *THANK YOU FOR MY CLASSMATE* THEY HELP ME.

gerald_feedback

He's profession speake because he's eye contact. THANK YOU EVERYTHING FOR ME

name: Gerald
B1: Submit
Date: August 23, 2001
Time: 20:09

Gustavo_feedback

what was good? what could be improved? nice introduction?

In my point of view, Gustavo did a great job. The structure was well organised and he didn’t use his notes (perfect). I think Gustavo was very well prepared and he is a very good speaker. He could work a little on his introduction. clear overview? clear structure? interesting content? I think Gustavo gave a clear overview about his project. good body language? Gustavo has a very pleasant body-language eye contact? Perfect, but he should not look to the screen during explaining something on the slides.

designing and using visuals? Perfect, interesting graphs! language? I’m of the opinion that Gustavo has improved his English very much in the last four weeks! Actually he speaks clearly and for me his easy to understand

goong_feedback

what was good? what could be improved? nice introduction? Well done Goong! I think it was clear and not too difficult to understand. Try to peak more to the audience! nice introduction? I think the introduction was sufficient. clear overview? OK clear structure? OK interesting content? I think it was interesting for everyone and you like this topic. (good job)

good body language? Try to get more relaxed!

designing and using visuals? OK

gerald_feedback

I’m not really satisfied with my presentation, and I think it was difficult to speak at last. So I fell a little tired during my presentation. I think it’s quit difficult to find positive words to my own presentation ,but I’ll try to find some positive aspects. POSITIVE ASPECTS I think it was an interesting topic, I spoke clearly and the slides were clear and interesting designed.

NEGATIVE ASPECTS

-Not fluent -Confused -Pronunciation -Conclusion was not clear -Too long -Body language -only little audience involvement

In the future should improve my notes-only the main points must be enough!

name: Peter
B1: Submit
Date: August 23, 2001
Time: 21:49

Gustavo_feedback

Impressive improvement in your pronanciation! I liked that you were so self-confident.I think you have a lot of experiences in making presentations. Your active eye-contact with the audience was able to help in drawing their attention. You also used the visual aids very well. If i were you, i would fully concentrate on the further development of the pronanciation. May be you could make your presentation style richer by retorical questions or trying to involve the audience more. Well done!

from 1-5

- nice introduction 4-5 - clear overview 4-5 - clear structure 4-5 - interesting 5 content - clear 'signposting' 4-5 - good body language 4-5 - eye contact 5 - audience involvement 4 - designing and using visuals language 5 - language 4

goong_feedback

Your honest smile can improve the mood of the audience as well. Your topic was interesting,with a clear structure, good signposting, reach vocabulary. Carry on improving further your pronanciation. Good work!

from 1-5

- nice introduction 4 - clear overview 4-5 - clear structure 5 - interesting 5 content - clear 'signposting' 4-5 - good body language 4-5 - eye contact 4 - audience involvement 4 - designing and using visuals language 4 - language 4

gerald_feedback

Your presentation was the most interesting for me on that afternoon. You revealed a lot of really useful infomation, the conclusion was great, the slides were clear and creative. All are signs of long a careful preparation. It's good that you can laugh honestly while presenting. You made your presentation with some retorical questions even more enjoyable. Your vocabulary was also quite rich. It seemed to me that on this presentation you were a little less relaxed than before. May be you used your notes to much and turned back to often. Sometimes the sentences seemed to me too long, especially in the Q&A section. Generally,it was a great performance!

from 1-5

- nice introduction 4-5 - clear overview 4-5 - clear structure 5 - interesting 5 content - clear 'signposting' 4-5 - good body language 4-5 - eye contact 4-5 - audience involvement 4-5 - designing and using visuals language 5 - language 4-5

name: Peter
B1: Submit
Date: August 23, 2001
Time: 21:52

Gustavo_feedback

Impressive improvement in your pronanciation! I liked that you were so self-confident.I think you have a lot of experiences in making presentations. Your active eye-contact with the audience was able to help in drawing their attention. You also used the visual aids very well. If i were you, i would fully concentrate on the further development of the pronanciation. May be you could make your presentation style richer by retorical questions or trying to involve the audience more. Well done!

from 1-5

- nice introduction 4-5 - clear overview 4-5 - clear structure 4-5 - interesting content 5 - clear 'signposting' 4-5 - good body language 4-5 - eye contact 5 - audience involvement 4 - designing and using visuals language 5 - language 4

goong_feedback

Your honest smile can improve the mood of the audience as well. Your topic was interesting,with a clear structure, good signposting, reach vocabulary. Carry on improving further your pronanciation. Good work!

from 1-5

- nice introduction 4 - clear overview 4-5 - clear structure 5 - interesting content 5 - clear 'signposting' 4-5 - good body language 4-5 - eye contact 4 - audience involvement 4 - designing and using visuals language 4 - language 4

gerald_feedback

Your presentation was the most interesting for me on that afternoon. You revealed a lot of really useful infomation, the conclusion was great, the slides were clear and creative. All are signs of long a careful preparation. It's good that you can laugh honestly while presenting. You made your presentation with some retorical questions even more enjoyable. Your vocabulary was also quite rich. It seemed to me that on this presentation you were a little less relaxed than before. May be you used your notes to much and turned back to often. Sometimes the sentences seemed to me too long, especially in the Q&A section. Generally,it was a great performance!

from 1-5

- nice introduction 4-5 - clear overview 4-5 - clear structure 5 - interesting content 5 - clear 'signposting' 4-5 - good body language 4-5 - eye contact 4-5 - audience involvement 4-5 - designing and using visuals language 5 - language 4-5

name: bob
B1: Submit
Date: March 14, 2003
Time: 22:53

Gustavo_feedback

ok

goong_feedback

ok

gerald_feedback

ok

name: nico
B1: Submit
Date: June 17, 2003
Time: 16:44

Gustavo_feedback

excellent

goong_feedback

he sucks

gerald_feedback

bwah