B1: Submit
Date: August 03, 2000
Time: 10:02
log_1
1,I have been business English course ,in class I have studied busimess skill,outside I have looked for freinds.
2,Business study is so dificult for me.
3,I think, I must make responsbity for my life.
4,I am going to university,I will need a lot of knowlages.
I wentto Datington Crystal that is glass maker company {***}, then i saw how to make same glasses.
The most interesting thing is recycling. There are a lot of recycling systems.If someone fines a rejected article of glass and pice of glass, it will be recycled. It makes curtailment of cost,also never makes waste of glass. At a moment,a lot of things have been recycled,cans, bins,paper etc. Recycling system has been necessary for factory.
| Instances | Description |
| 4 | ARTICLE - you have made a mistake with the use of the article ( ie a, an, the or zero) with a noun or noun phrase. First check that you know whether the noun is countable or uncountable, and singular or plural |
| 1 | NOT THE BEST CHOICE - your meaning is clear but this is not a good way, or not the best way, to express it. This may relate to one word, or a phrase or a whole sentence. You may need to change the syntax or the vocabulary or both. |
| 1 | PHRASE CONSTRUCTION - you have used the wrong construction after the verb/noun/adjective/adverb; for example, you might have used 'to' instead of 'that', or an '-ing' form instead of 'to' etc |
| 1 | PREPOSITION - you have used the wrong preposition, or the preposition is missing, or you don't need a preposition |
| 1 | PUNCTUATION - punctuation mistake. For example, you may have used a comma when it is not necessary, or a capital letter is required. |
| 1 | RELATIVE PRONOUN - you have used the wrong relative pronoun form (who, which, that, where, whose, preposition + who/which, zero relative); or you have used it incorrectly; or a relative pronoun is needed. |
| 1 | SENTENCE ERROR: COMMA SPLICE - you have incorrectly joined two main (or independent) clauses with a comma. You need to make two separate sentences, or use a different connective or marker to join the clauses. |
| 1 | NUMBER OF NOUN - you have put a word in the singular when it should be plural, or vice versa. Or perhaps the noun is countable and you thought it was uncountable, or vice versa. Check that you have used the right article, as well. |
| 6 | SPELLING - the word is wrongly spelled. |
| 1 | VERB TENSE - you have put the verb in the wrong tense eg present instead of future, or continuous instead of simple. |
| 2 | VOCABULARY MISTAKE - you have used the wrong word. Check in the dictionary. |
| 1 | CAPITALISATION PROBLEM - you have mixed up lower and upper case spelling. |
| 1 | LOGICAL LINKS - reconsider your logical connection. |
| 1 | SPACE PROBLEM - you have put a space where there should not be any, or a space is missing. |