B1: Submit
Date: August 02, 2000
Time: 19:17
log_1
Hello, first of all I have to say I was here two years ago and last month in general course , then I knew how are the lessons and the town. This new course gives to me more knowledge what keep relationship with my degree in Spain and will be useful in my job in the future, for example how to do a good presentation what I have been learnt today. For me that is very interesting as learn economic vocabulary and improve my fluency. Living in the campus help you to develop your english and to learn about other cultures because have many different situations everyday. In the future, when I finish my degree I would like to do a master here if it is possible, concretly MBA or someone similar, I have to think about it. That would open many ways to me to look for a good job. Finally I have to say that I feel very happy here and I am learning too much english.
| Instances | Description |
| 2 | ARTICLE - you have made a mistake with the use of the article ( ie a, an, the or zero) with a noun or noun phrase. First check that you know whether the noun is countable or uncountable, and singular or plural |
| 1 | MARKER/CONNECTIVE - you may have used the wrong one, or not used one where it is needed, or used one incorrectly |
| 3 | UNCLEAR - the reader does not understand what you are trying to say here |
| 3 | PHRASE CONSTRUCTION - you have used the wrong construction after the verb/noun/adjective/adverb; for example, you might have used 'to' instead of 'that', or an '-ing' form instead of 'to' etc |
| 1 | PREPOSITION - you have used the wrong preposition, or the preposition is missing, or you don't need a preposition |
| 1 | RELATIVE PRONOUN - you have used the wrong relative pronoun form (who, which, that, where, whose, preposition + who/which, zero relative); or you have used it incorrectly; or a relative pronoun is needed. |
| 1 | SENTENCE ERROR: COMMA SPLICE - you have incorrectly joined two main (or independent) clauses with a comma. You need to make two separate sentences, or use a different connective or marker to join the clauses. |
| 1 | SENTENCE ERROR: INCOMPLETE SENTENCE - there is no main verb. Check whether you have used the wrong kind of logical marker at the beginning of your 'sentence'. |
| 1 | NUMBER OF NOUN - you have put a word in the singular when it should be plural, or vice versa. Or perhaps the noun is countable and you thought it was uncountable, or vice versa. Check that you have used the right article, as well. |
| 1 | VERB TENSE - you have put the verb in the wrong tense eg present instead of future, or continuous instead of simple. |
| 1 | VERB FORM - you have used the wrong form of the verb. For example, singular instead of plural, infinitive instead of -ing, wrong auxiliary, passive instead of active or vice versa, etc. |
| 1 | VOCABULARY MISTAKE - you have used the wrong word. Check in the dictionary. |
| 2 | CAPITALISATION PROBLEM - you have mixed up lower and upper case spelling. |