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name: Juergen Endres

B1: Submit

Date: August 03, 2000

Time: 10:29

log_1

The contents of our lessons were the communication skills, how to do presentations and to intruduce ourself. We talk about the different ways to do smalltalk and about the taboos in smalltalk in diffrent countries. Yestarday we visit a glas manufacture. The most suprising thing during this visit for me was that it tooks about ten years to educate a high level worker for the company. An other very exiting thing is that they only produce there goods by hand even they serve the high, middle and low quality market. I can't belive taht this strategy works because the costs for thier low quality products must be to high comparing to other - industrial producer - competitors.




Statistics

InstancesDescription
3ARTICLE - you have made a mistake with the use of the article ( ie a, an, the or zero) with a noun or noun phrase. First check that you know whether the noun is countable or uncountable, and singular or plural
1MARKER/CONNECTIVE - you may have used the wrong one, or not used one where it is needed, or used one incorrectly
1NOT THE BEST CHOICE - your meaning is clear but this is not a good way, or not the best way, to express it. This may relate to one word, or a phrase or a whole sentence. You may need to change the syntax or the vocabulary or both.
1PHRASE CONSTRUCTION - you have used the wrong construction after the verb/noun/adjective/adverb; for example, you might have used 'to' instead of 'that', or an '-ing' form instead of 'to' etc
1PUNCTUATION - punctuation mistake. For example, you may have used a comma when it is not necessary, or a capital letter is required.
1NUMBER OF NOUN - you have put a word in the singular when it should be plural, or vice versa. Or perhaps the noun is countable and you thought it was uncountable, or vice versa. Check that you have used the right article, as well.
8SPELLING - the word is wrongly spelled.
2VERB TENSE - you have put the verb in the wrong tense eg present instead of future, or continuous instead of simple.
2VERB FORM - you have used the wrong form of the verb. For example, singular instead of plural, infinitive instead of -ing, wrong auxiliary, passive instead of active or vice versa, etc.
2VOCABULARY MISTAKE - you have used the wrong word. Check in the dictionary.
1WORD FORM - you used a word in the wrong form. For example, you have used the adjective form when you should have used the noun form, or adverb instead of adjective etc.
1SPACE PROBLEM - you have put a space where there should not be any, or a space is missing.
Negative total: 24
Positive total: 0


Feedback (1)

Dear Juergen,

Thanks for your first log. Can you understand the comments and annotations I have made?

Best wishes,

Norbert