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name: Juergen Endres

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Date: August 07, 2000

Time: 18:34

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Dear Sir, as you requested in our telephone conversation we had last Friday we like {1} to give you a short description of our achievements. .DSD Automotive is a provider of services for the automotive industry. Our services include installing and managing of infrastructure like buildings (including fire protection, pipe-networking, heating, cooling water systems and compressed air systems), facility management with cleaning, delivering of office tools, gardening as well as organising security and fire brigade. Another important part of our service is maintenance of production plants. We take over the servicing of your production facilities including installing, removing and dismantling. We also make available only the staff for maintenance if requested. We manage waist {2}-logistics, spare part -logistics and packaging-logistics. Because of the demand of our customers our consulting service was installed{3}. With our customers we develop the best solution for their requirements in nonproduction-process. We like to provide a tailored program of services for all our customers. Therefore we cooperate with our customers to find out what they need and how we can meet their demands. …




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Dear Juergen,

Thanks for your revised version. I have corrected misunderstandings in footnotes. I hope this helps.

Best wishes

Norbert