B1: Submit
Date: August 02, 2000
Time: 23:39
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1.On monday i had my first interview, which was very nice and i get to know every one of the teachers and assistance. After that we had to do the exam for english language.At last we had a campus tour.in our classes i learned alot of way of behaving in britain and how to use the language properly and also how buisness works in england abritain and in other cultures.
2.it was very interesting for me to visit the glass company and to know how it is produced and it was especially intersting to have a talk with the manager.
3.Actually it was very nice to get to know a lot of english and a lot of people of other cultures as well.I also know much more about how british behave in buisness and in their life.
4.Actually i will get use of what i will learn here in exeter like how to behave in buisnees and how to talk in a formal way in meetings with buisness people.
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| 1 | PHRASE CONSTRUCTION - you have used the wrong construction after the verb/noun/adjective/adverb; for example, you might have used 'to' instead of 'that', or an '-ing' form instead of 'to' etc |
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| 1 | SENTENCE TOO LONG - your sentence needs to be made into several shorter ones. |
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| 5 | SPELLING - the word is wrongly spelled. |
| 1 | VERB TENSE - you have put the verb in the wrong tense eg present instead of future, or continuous instead of simple. |
| 1 | VOCABULARY MISTAKE - you have used the wrong word. Check in the dictionary. |
| 1 | WORD FORM - you used a word in the wrong form. For example, you have used the adjective form when you should have used the noun form, or adverb instead of adjective etc. |
| 14 | CAPITALISATION PROBLEM - you have mixed up lower and upper case spelling. |
| 1 | SPACE PROBLEM - you have put a space where there should not be any, or a space is missing. |