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name: massimiliano

B1: Submit

Date: August 02, 2000

Time: 22:41

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In class we started talking about business english, and we also started our discussion about our project work. I did other few english courses years ago, but this is my first time in a business course, so for me it is new the way to teach english, all the issues are done with a business vision. I think this will be very useful for me, because I want firsrt to improve my english, but at the same time I want to have also a vision of this language in an International business context. In future I think i`ll be a sort of free lance worker, so I hope this course will help me to give me the possibility to expand my professional goals also in an international way.




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2NOT THE BEST CHOICE - your meaning is clear but this is not a good way, or not the best way, to express it. This may relate to one word, or a phrase or a whole sentence. You may need to change the syntax or the vocabulary or both.
1SENTENCE ERROR: COMMA SPLICE - you have incorrectly joined two main (or independent) clauses with a comma. You need to make two separate sentences, or use a different connective or marker to join the clauses.
1SPELLING - the word is wrongly spelled.
1VERB FORM - you have used the wrong form of the verb. For example, singular instead of plural, infinitive instead of -ing, wrong auxiliary, passive instead of active or vice versa, etc.
1VOCABULARY MISTAKE - you have used the wrong word. Check in the dictionary.
2WORD ORDER - you have written a group of words in the wrong order. Re-arrange.
6CAPITALISATION PROBLEM - you have mixed up lower and upper case spelling.
1LOGICAL LINKS - reconsider your logical connection.
Negative total: 15
Positive total: 0


Feedback (1)

Dear Massimiliano,

Thanks for your first log and impressions. Can you understand all the comments and annotations?

Best wishes,

Norbert.