B1: Submit
Date: August 03, 2000
Time: 02:43
log_1
1. Well! I really feel tired since this Monday unite now, when I started this new course, but I learened quite a lot of things from the teachers and my classmate . For example , like how to use phone to make short arrange or speak on the phone in English with another company or people etc. . 2. I think everything for me are very interesting and so on. Then I would like to learn more in this month. I was so surprised from the beginning, because it's complete different tape the courses, so......
3. I think most importent for me which's project work, that was remind me over the night. I have not got any clue about this. So I do not know how to answer it at the moment, but may be next week or before we finish this course I hope I can give you the answer.
4. I am not quite show which one will be more useful for me, but I think all of them for me that is very important in the future. No I idea. Let things go on.
p.s Below this four questions is my report, which's about this afternoon the trip. Could you help me to correct it,please? This afternoon I have had a wonderful visiting to "Dartington Crystal".It was very interesting the trip. From the beginning I saw the many different tape the glasses and many workers were making new glassings. At the end we met the manager, who was answer our many questions.
For example, I asked him about "how long it will be take the people become a top maker?". He said: it might be take a ten or twelve years for training basic maker after that, parhapes they cna become a professional in this company. But another possibility is : If you have the dextrous hands, that will not take you like that longer. So from this question I really appreciate why this company making a perfack of profit in Britian, which's about 16 million pounds per a year. So this trip gave me too many unlike sense. I really enjoy it. I hope next week will be the same, but different company. Thank you for arrage {***} this visiting and paying attention to read this very bad article{1}.
| Instances | Description |
| 2 | ARTICLE - you have made a mistake with the use of the article ( ie a, an, the or zero) with a noun or noun phrase. First check that you know whether the noun is countable or uncountable, and singular or plural |
| 9 | UNCLEAR - the reader does not understand what you are trying to say here |
| 2 | NOT THE BEST CHOICE - your meaning is clear but this is not a good way, or not the best way, to express it. This may relate to one word, or a phrase or a whole sentence. You may need to change the syntax or the vocabulary or both. |
| 7 | PHRASE CONSTRUCTION - you have used the wrong construction after the verb/noun/adjective/adverb; for example, you might have used 'to' instead of 'that', or an '-ing' form instead of 'to' etc |
| 2 | PUNCTUATION - punctuation mistake. For example, you may have used a comma when it is not necessary, or a capital letter is required. |
| 1 | SENTENCE ERROR: INCOMPLETE SENTENCE - there is no main verb. Check whether you have used the wrong kind of logical marker at the beginning of your 'sentence'. |
| 1 | SENTENCE ERROR: RUN-ON SENTENCE - your 'sentence' consists of two main clauses not properly connected. You may need to put in a full stop to make two separate sentences |
| 4 | NUMBER OF NOUN - you have put a word in the singular when it should be plural, or vice versa. Or perhaps the noun is countable and you thought it was uncountable, or vice versa. Check that you have used the right article, as well. |
| 7 | SPELLING - the word is wrongly spelled. |
| 3 | VERB TENSE - you have put the verb in the wrong tense eg present instead of future, or continuous instead of simple. |
| 2 | VERB FORM - you have used the wrong form of the verb. For example, singular instead of plural, infinitive instead of -ing, wrong auxiliary, passive instead of active or vice versa, etc. |
| 3 | VOCABULARY MISTAKE - you have used the wrong word. Check in the dictionary. |
| 1 | WORD FORM - you used a word in the wrong form. For example, you have used the adjective form when you should have used the noun form, or adverb instead of adjective etc. |