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name: Aida

B1: Submit

Date: August 10, 2000

Time: 10:34

log_1

1.I have experienced a lot since my latest log entry. Life in Exeter is very bright and full of events. The most memorable events were doing presentation on the topic of business culture, a trip to Bath and an amazing trip to Sidmouth {***}

2.Doing presentation {1} on business culture was really interesting and new for me, because I've never did {2} such kind of work. We went to the streets and asked people aout their attitude {3} towards profession.It was really nice and interesting.

3.The most important thing that I have learned is communicating with people from all over the world. I find it precious to have such an opportunity to make a lot of friends from differnt countries. This helps to understand and to learn more about diifferent cultures from your own experience.

4.As I've already mentioned communicating with foreign students is very useful,as i study international relations. Now it is not a problem for me, as I know that I can understand them and they would {4} understand me.




Statistics

InstancesDescription
1ARTICLE - you have made a mistake with the use of the article ( ie a, an, the or zero) with a noun or noun phrase. First check that you know whether the noun is countable or uncountable, and singular or plural
1PHRASE CONSTRUCTION - you have used the wrong construction after the verb/noun/adjective/adverb; for example, you might have used 'to' instead of 'that', or an '-ing' form instead of 'to' etc
1PUNCTUATION - punctuation mistake. For example, you may have used a comma when it is not necessary, or a capital letter is required.
1NUMBER OF NOUN - you have put a word in the singular when it should be plural, or vice versa. Or perhaps the noun is countable and you thought it was uncountable, or vice versa. Check that you have used the right article, as well.
2SPELLING - the word is wrongly spelled.
1VERB TENSE - you have put the verb in the wrong tense eg present instead of future, or continuous instead of simple.
1VERB FORM - you have used the wrong form of the verb. For example, singular instead of plural, infinitive instead of -ing, wrong auxiliary, passive instead of active or vice versa, etc.
1CAPITALISATION PROBLEM - you have mixed up lower and upper case spelling.
Negative total: 9
Positive total: 0


Feedback (1)

Dear Aida,

Thanks for your second log. As you can see, you might still want to do some work on using articles and dealing with singular/plural issues.

Good luck and best wishes

Norbert