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name: validova asya

B1: Submit

Date: August 10, 2000

Time: 10:36

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1.I am very interested in the subject of our project work "Euro and its influence on cooperation between countries". I analized this subject in Russia and it is very useful to understand what british people thinkabout it.

2.Together with our group we went clubing {1} two days ago. I liked the atmosphere of the club, it {2} is very cozy, people are very friendly and communicative.

3.In class we practiced writing CV {3}. In different countries the mechanism of writing CV is not the same, our russian CV differs a lot from the british.

4. I've learned some many business terms which, I think, will be very usefull and help me in my future professional activities.




Statistics

InstancesDescription
2SENTENCE ERROR: COMMA SPLICE - you have incorrectly joined two main (or independent) clauses with a comma. You need to make two separate sentences, or use a different connective or marker to join the clauses.
1NUMBER OF NOUN - you have put a word in the singular when it should be plural, or vice versa. Or perhaps the noun is countable and you thought it was uncountable, or vice versa. Check that you have used the right article, as well.
4SPELLING - the word is wrongly spelled.
3CAPITALISATION PROBLEM - you have mixed up lower and upper case spelling.
1SPACE PROBLEM - you have put a space where there should not be any, or a space is missing.
Negative total: 11
Positive total: 0


Feedback (1)

Dear Asya,

Thanks for your second log. As you can see, you might want to study when to use capital letters, improve your spelling and consider issues of singular and plural usage.

Best wishes and good luck

Norbert