B1: Submit
Date: August 06, 2000
Time: 13:52
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Last Friday I met my group in order to decide the best way to work at {1} our project: it was a very interesting meeting. We have discussed a lot and at the end we have submitted our results to Sue. She said it is a good way to work, and I felt very satisfied. We have devided our work in four parts: 1. The value chain of tourism in Devon. 2. The main attractions in Devon. 3. The tourist advertisement of Devon. 4. Transports and environmental impact of tourism in Devon. Each component {2} of the gruop is going to develop one of these topics. I hope we'll do a good job. Last Friday we have also visited the web pages of the County Council. Tomorrow we are going to visit the "Devon County Council" in Exeter to get as much information as possible.
Yesterday we went out for a trip to Bath. It is a very nice city with a very good preserved historical centre. Alessandra and me visited the Roman Bath. It is very interesting but quite expensive: 7.90£ {3}, I think it is not cheap for a student! Perhaps it is because of the change {4} with {5} the Italian Lira, but I think that in Italy visiting such a museum is a bit cheaper.
Instances | Description |
1 | ARTICLE - you have made a mistake with the use of the article ( ie a, an, the or zero) with a noun or noun phrase. First check that you know whether the noun is countable or uncountable, and singular or plural |
3 | PREPOSITION - you have used the wrong preposition, or the preposition is missing, or you don't need a preposition |
1 | NUMBER OF NOUN - you have put a word in the singular when it should be plural, or vice versa. Or perhaps the noun is countable and you thought it was uncountable, or vice versa. Check that you have used the right article, as well. |
2 | SPELLING - the word is wrongly spelled. |
3 | VERB TENSE - you have put the verb in the wrong tense eg present instead of future, or continuous instead of simple. |
3 | VOCABULARY MISTAKE - you have used the wrong word. Check in the dictionary. |
1 | WORD FORM - you used a word in the wrong form. For example, you have used the adjective form when you should have used the noun form, or adverb instead of adjective etc. |
1 | WORD ORDER - you have written a group of words in the wrong order. Re-arrange. |