B1: Submit
Date: August 08, 2000
Time: 18:53
log_1
I am going to divide the answers to this questions in {1} two parts: - {2}
- First I am going to speak about the course. The course is following the same line that we were working last week, basically {3} we are doing the same, maybe the charge {4} of the course is stronger in areas like vocabulary, gramar and general knowledge of english. This week we are working in {5} wrinting CV {6} and preparing job interviews, its {7} means, more useful {8} in the future, at least for me, because I have to get a job in the folowing mounths.
-On the other hand, I want to speak about the proyect. As you know I wanted to do the project about tourism, but I am alone, so the group is me and myself, and the aims of the proyect are: to do a {9} research of one bussines in Uk {10}; to do a presentation, and to works {11} into a team, using the {12} english as a first {13} language. I decided to leave {14} this proyect, because for me is {15} very important to work in a team, I think is going {16} to be very useful in {17} my future, and in this new group I can work with more people, and I am going to do a presentation and a research of a bussines in England, of course, I would have prefered to study the tourism, but banking is also interesting. Out of {18} the course, only to speak {19} about the trip to Bath, in my own opinion the trip could have been more organised, but was {20} OK, only OK.
| Instances | Description |
| 4 | ARTICLE - you have made a mistake with the use of the article ( ie a, an, the or zero) with a noun or noun phrase. First check that you know whether the noun is countable or uncountable, and singular or plural |
| 4 | PHRASE CONSTRUCTION - you have used the wrong construction after the verb/noun/adjective/adverb; for example, you might have used 'to' instead of 'that', or an '-ing' form instead of 'to' etc |
| 4 | PREPOSITION - you have used the wrong preposition, or the preposition is missing, or you don't need a preposition |
| 1 | PUNCTUATION - punctuation mistake. For example, you may have used a comma when it is not necessary, or a capital letter is required. |
| 5 | SENTENCE ERROR: COMMA SPLICE - you have incorrectly joined two main (or independent) clauses with a comma. You need to make two separate sentences, or use a different connective or marker to join the clauses. |
| 1 | SENTENCE ERROR: INCOMPLETE SENTENCE - there is no main verb. Check whether you have used the wrong kind of logical marker at the beginning of your 'sentence'. |
| 1 | SENTENCE TOO LONG - your sentence needs to be made into several shorter ones. |
| 2 | NUMBER OF NOUN - you have put a word in the singular when it should be plural, or vice versa. Or perhaps the noun is countable and you thought it was uncountable, or vice versa. Check that you have used the right article, as well. |
| 9 | SPELLING - the word is wrongly spelled. |
| 3 | VOCABULARY MISTAKE - you have used the wrong word. Check in the dictionary. |
| 2 | WORD FORM - you used a word in the wrong form. For example, you have used the adjective form when you should have used the noun form, or adverb instead of adjective etc. |
| 3 | CAPITALISATION PROBLEM - you have mixed up lower and upper case spelling. |