B1: Submit
Date: August 05, 2000
Time: 22:04
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Dear Sir,
as you requested in our telephone conversation we had last friday you will find enclosed a short description of our achievments. DSD Automotive is a provider for {1} services which are around your production process. Our services include erection and managing of {2} all kind of infrastructure like buildings (including fire protection, pipworking, heating, cooling water system and compressed air system), facility management with cleaning, delivering of office tools, gardening as well as organising securities and fire brigades. Another imortant part of our services is maintenance of production plants. We take over the servicing of your production facilities including erection, removing and wasting. We also make available the staff only for maintinace if you request it. We manage waist-logistic, sparepart-logistic and packeaging-logistics. Becaus of the demand of our customers we installed our consulting services. Our team will develop together with our customers the best solution for thier requirements in nonproduction-prcesses. We like to provide a tailored programm of services for all our customers. Therfore we search the conversation {3} with our customers to find out what each of them {4} need and how we can meet them {5}. ....
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