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name: Karim Mostafa

B1: Submit

Date: August 07, 2000

Time: 15:25

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Log no.2

Last week we did our survey. My group was representing the english culture through food. We asked people questions in the city of Exeter as for example their favorite food {1} and how they go shopping. In my opinion presentations are useful, but i think we loose {2} alot of time if we go every Thursday to the city. I think we can use this time in learning more about the english language and about buisness.On the weekend i could not go to bath , becuse i had some pains in my hand, so i thougt it is better to stay at home. I really find it very interesting that we have on our course such a large amount of students of diffrent cultures. I know now much more of the traditions in asia and their way of behaving and how they respect each other for example younger people respect older people. I hope that i can use in my future life, what i have learned untill now. I




Statistics

InstancesDescription
1ARTICLE - you have made a mistake with the use of the article ( ie a, an, the or zero) with a noun or noun phrase. First check that you know whether the noun is countable or uncountable, and singular or plural
3PREPOSITION - you have used the wrong preposition, or the preposition is missing, or you don't need a preposition
1PUNCTUATION - punctuation mistake. For example, you may have used a comma when it is not necessary, or a capital letter is required.
1SENTENCE ERROR: INCOMPLETE SENTENCE - there is no main verb. Check whether you have used the wrong kind of logical marker at the beginning of your 'sentence'.
5SPELLING - the word is wrongly spelled.
1VERB TENSE - you have put the verb in the wrong tense eg present instead of future, or continuous instead of simple.
1VOCABULARY MISTAKE - you have used the wrong word. Check in the dictionary.
2WORD ORDER - you have written a group of words in the wrong order. Re-arrange.
10CAPITALISATION PROBLEM - you have mixed up lower and upper case spelling.
1SPACE PROBLEM - you have put a space where there should not be any, or a space is missing.
Negative total: 26
Positive total: 0


Feedback (1)

Dear Karim,

Thanks for your second log. Please consider the comments and annotations made. Among the suggestions I would make are to use a spell-checker and to be careful with articles, prepositions and the occasional tense problem. Keep up the good work.

Best wishes

Norbert