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name: massimiliano

B1: Submit

Date: August 06, 2000

Time: 22:25

log_1

For me it was very interesting the ¡°mini-survey¡±, made on the field. It was very useful to go out and speak to English people. I also think that was nice to do the presentation in front of all the class, it was a way to improve my English, trying to do a whole speech in a correct English, with the correct words, in a stressing situation. As I have said in the precedent log, my first goal is to learn the language, to have the right feedbacks on the speaking and writing mistakes that I make. Doing the practice with the project work is, for me, a further opportunity of learning: while I learn the language I have also the choice to have a (little) knowledge of the business world in another country and this could be very useful for me in the future, but, sincerely, I could not say, at the moment, in which particular way.




Statistics

InstancesDescription
1ARTICLE - you have made a mistake with the use of the article ( ie a, an, the or zero) with a noun or noun phrase. First check that you know whether the noun is countable or uncountable, and singular or plural
1PHRASE CONSTRUCTION - you have used the wrong construction after the verb/noun/adjective/adverb; for example, you might have used 'to' instead of 'that', or an '-ing' form instead of 'to' etc
1PREPOSITION - you have used the wrong preposition, or the preposition is missing, or you don't need a preposition
1NUMBER OF NOUN - you have put a word in the singular when it should be plural, or vice versa. Or perhaps the noun is countable and you thought it was uncountable, or vice versa. Check that you have used the right article, as well.
2WORD FORM - you used a word in the wrong form. For example, you have used the adjective form when you should have used the noun form, or adverb instead of adjective etc.
2WORD ORDER - you have written a group of words in the wrong order. Re-arrange.
Negative total: 8
Positive total: 0


Feedback (1)

Dear Massimiliano,

Thanks for your second log. In terms of language you might want to practise, please consider the use of articles and word-order. Also be careful with which form of a lexical item you use: precedent or preceding, stressing or stressful.

Keep up the good spirit.

Norbert