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name: JORGE DOVAL

B1: Submit

Date: August 14, 2000

Time: 10:39

log_3

First of all I'm sorry for my late {1}. I think I have learning more about business everyday and I am improving to do presentations. One of the most important things of the course are interviews with managers for the project work which are very interesting for me. In the last presentation "Smile", taiwanise {***} boy, was incredible because {2} I had another idea of the asian people, I though they were shy, stricks,...and never making jokes, last day that point of view changed for me. That is all for this time.Thank you. JORGE




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InstancesDescription
2ARTICLE - you have made a mistake with the use of the article ( ie a, an, the or zero) with a noun or noun phrase. First check that you know whether the noun is countable or uncountable, and singular or plural
1MARKER/CONNECTIVE - you may have used the wrong one, or not used one where it is needed, or used one incorrectly
1UNCLEAR - the reader does not understand what you are trying to say here
1PHRASE CONSTRUCTION - you have used the wrong construction after the verb/noun/adjective/adverb; for example, you might have used 'to' instead of 'that', or an '-ing' form instead of 'to' etc
2SPELLING - the word is wrongly spelled.
1VERB TENSE - you have put the verb in the wrong tense eg present instead of future, or continuous instead of simple.
1VERB FORM - you have used the wrong form of the verb. For example, singular instead of plural, infinitive instead of -ing, wrong auxiliary, passive instead of active or vice versa, etc.
1VOCABULARY MISTAKE - you have used the wrong word. Check in the dictionary.
2CAPITALISATION PROBLEM - you have mixed up lower and upper case spelling.
Negative total: 12
Positive total: 0


Feedback (1)

Dear Jorge,

Thanks for your third log. Can you underrstand the notes and annotations I have made?

Best wishes

Norbert