B1: Submit
Date: August 11, 2000
Time: 12:17
log_3
I send {1} my log three days ago, so the {2} things haven't changed a lot, anyway I'll speak about these days in {3} the Uniersity of Exeter. We visited the career centre on Wednesday after the lunch break, and before it we have a guess speaker, Mark{***} the director of the career centre, so we spent more three hours in {4} something that we could have done in one hours or one and a half hours, but in my opinion the visit and the speach form {5} the director was interesting. About {6} the mini-survey, it was very similar to the last {7} mini-survey, maybe we have improved the way of doing presentations, I don't really know, but You, Jeff and Sue say that we have improved. Finally, I'll move on to other issues related to the course, but not in the academic order {8}. The international food was great, as I see it was a fantastic way to integrate cultures, we could taste diferents {9} food form {10} all the country , I missed indian food, it's a pity that in this course there was nobody from that area in the world, because I love that kind of food, but definetely the international food is an escellent idea. And I think thats all, now I am in the banking group, it think it's a little bit diffucult to do the research, but with your help{***} {11} Norbert, we can get it. Otherwise we would not have managed to get it.
| Instances | Description |
| 2 | ARTICLE - you have made a mistake with the use of the article ( ie a, an, the or zero) with a noun or noun phrase. First check that you know whether the noun is countable or uncountable, and singular or plural |
| 1 | MARKER/CONNECTIVE - you may have used the wrong one, or not used one where it is needed, or used one incorrectly |
| 1 | PHRASE CONSTRUCTION - you have used the wrong construction after the verb/noun/adjective/adverb; for example, you might have used 'to' instead of 'that', or an '-ing' form instead of 'to' etc |
| 2 | PREPOSITION - you have used the wrong preposition, or the preposition is missing, or you don't need a preposition |
| 3 | PUNCTUATION - punctuation mistake. For example, you may have used a comma when it is not necessary, or a capital letter is required. |
| 3 | SENTENCE ERROR: COMMA SPLICE - you have incorrectly joined two main (or independent) clauses with a comma. You need to make two separate sentences, or use a different connective or marker to join the clauses. |
| 1 | SENTENCE TOO LONG - your sentence needs to be made into several shorter ones. |
| 2 | NUMBER OF NOUN - you have put a word in the singular when it should be plural, or vice versa. Or perhaps the noun is countable and you thought it was uncountable, or vice versa. Check that you have used the right article, as well. |
| 8 | SPELLING - the word is wrongly spelled. |
| 2 | VERB TENSE - you have put the verb in the wrong tense eg present instead of future, or continuous instead of simple. |
| 2 | VOCABULARY MISTAKE - you have used the wrong word. Check in the dictionary. |
| 2 | CAPITALISATION PROBLEM - you have mixed up lower and upper case spelling. |