Ersan - Bluewater

Strong points:

Greeting

Reference to sources

Improved human skills

Points to improve:

Better preparation of content and subject matter knowledge would help

Some of the figures do not seem quite right: £350 to build? £5.5 million in sales a year?

Language:

Most attraction shopping centre

I asked to my lecturer

BW is opened on 19 March 1999

Can serve 5000 peoples

30 million people from the world

Pronunciation:

Your intonation is a little monotonous