Young Mee - Korean and Japanese car manufacturers

Strong points:

Nice intoduction

Friendly

Good use of phrases and referencing to visuals

Points to improve:

Do not turn your back on the audience while you talk about visuals - point on OHP

Sometimes your linking is not very clear, use the phrases

Language:

I worked to assistant manager

Our project is joined to Japanese car company

One of the largest car company in the Korea

Actually I did not prepare conclusion

During work in my project

Next table it show

Compared to japan car company

Our country car prices very low

Now last decade the car industry is a little break down

Many different country cars

Pronunciation:

As a consultant

In the future